Where to now?

I have re-writen the first five chapters of "The Persian Bottle" - now called "Pete and the Perilous Persian Bottle" and I am very happy with the suggested changes.  The feedback I received has been really helpful and I can see the difference it is making already.  I am hopeful that the changes will make …

So what was the feedback on the manuscript?

Well it was all okay I guess.  I have some fabulous leads in terms of a publisher who may be interested (all about quality of work and timing of submission), and some excellent ideas for the story.  On the positive side the characters, their interactions, theme and location went down a treat, however I need …