I have re-writen the first five chapters of "The Persian Bottle" - now called "Pete and the Perilous Persian Bottle" and I am very happy with the suggested changes. Â The feedback I received has been really helpful and I can see the difference it is making already. Â I am hopeful that the changes will make …
So what was the feedback on the manuscript?
Well it was all okay I guess. Â I have some fabulous leads in terms of a publisher who may be interested (all about quality of work and timing of submission), and some excellent ideas for the story. Â On the positive side the characters, their interactions, theme and location went down a treat, however I need …
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2015 Reading List
At the end of 2014 my friend Aaron published a list of the books he had read in 2014 on his Facebook page. Â It occurred to me that I had not actually kept a list of the books that I had read and I have sought to remedy this by setting up a new page …
Draft Cover – The Persian Bottle
I have set up a draft cover (front and back) for my children's book. Â I am aware that if it gets accepted by a commercial publisher that I will not have much say in the final look - but if I have to self publish then I need to have something ready to go. Â These …

