I have re-writen the first five chapters of “The Persian Bottle” – now called “Pete and the Perilous Persian Bottle” and I am very happy with the suggested changes.  The feedback I received has been really helpful and I can see the difference it is making already.  I am hopeful that the changes will make for a much better story and hopefully a successful book. I will keep slogging away at it (not that I am finding it a slog).