The first review for "Pete and the Persian Bottle" is in. It is a Vlog review and you can access it here (Yet Another Blogging Mummy!!! http://blogmumjd.wordpress.com/). If it sounds like something you might like to read, you can download the first chapter here: "Pete and the Persian Bottle" - Chapter 1
So what was the feedback on the manuscript?
Well it was all okay I guess. Â I have some fabulous leads in terms of a publisher who may be interested (all about quality of work and timing of submission), and some excellent ideas for the story. Â On the positive side the characters, their interactions, theme and location went down a treat, however I need …
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Manuscript submitted for assessment
Well I did it. Â I submitted my children's book manuscript for an assessment. I submitted on time too - last Friday in fact. Â Now I just have to wait 6-8 weeks to find out what they think of it. I will let you know how I get on - hopefully I won't need a total …
Manuscript nearly ready to send in for a review
I am nearly ready to submit my children's book manuscript for an initial assessment. Â I say nearly ready because I have been reading it through (for the third time) and have found at least one mistake on every page, and two errors in the story. Â It never ceases to amaze me that there are so …
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