The first review for "Pete and the Persian Bottle" is in. It is a Vlog review and you can access it here (Yet Another Blogging Mummy!!! http://blogmumjd.wordpress.com/). If it sounds like something you might like to read, you can download the first chapter here: "Pete and the Persian Bottle" - Chapter 1
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So what was the feedback on the manuscript?
Well it was all okay I guess. I have some fabulous leads in terms of a publisher who may be interested (all about quality of work and timing of submission), and some excellent ideas for the story. On the positive side the characters, their interactions, theme and location went down a treat, however I need… Continue reading So what was the feedback on the manuscript?
Manuscript submitted for assessment
Well I did it. I submitted my children's book manuscript for an assessment. I submitted on time too - last Friday in fact. Now I just have to wait 6-8 weeks to find out what they think of it. I will let you know how I get on - hopefully I won't need a total… Continue reading Manuscript submitted for assessment
Manuscript nearly ready to send in for a review
I am nearly ready to submit my children's book manuscript for an initial assessment. I say nearly ready because I have been reading it through (for the third time) and have found at least one mistake on every page, and two errors in the story. It never ceases to amaze me that there are so… Continue reading Manuscript nearly ready to send in for a review
Sarah Jackson 