I have re-writen the first five chapters of "The Persian Bottle" - now called "Pete and the Perilous Persian Bottle" and I am very happy with the suggested changes. Â The feedback I received has been really helpful and I can see the difference it is making already. Â I am hopeful that the changes will make …
So what was the feedback on the manuscript?
Well it was all okay I guess. Â I have some fabulous leads in terms of a publisher who may be interested (all about quality of work and timing of submission), and some excellent ideas for the story. Â On the positive side the characters, their interactions, theme and location went down a treat, however I need …
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Publication Readiness Dysmorphia
At the moment I am going though all of my half started, half finished and half baked writing projects to see what I can do as a bit of a filler between now and when I get my manuscript assessment outcome back (probably about mid January). Â I intend to put some work into the "Better …
Manuscript submitted for assessment
Well I did it. Â I submitted my children's book manuscript for an assessment. I submitted on time too - last Friday in fact. Â Now I just have to wait 6-8 weeks to find out what they think of it. I will let you know how I get on - hopefully I won't need a total …

